Feedback from Draft Video

Although we both weren't expecting feedback to be great, obvious through the long list of issues we ourselves have with it, I think it really hit home that it needed a lot of work when feedback was received. We got 14/50 which is accurate for what we created however is not good enough in terms of what we want to achieve. Main points that were highlighted for improvement were:

• poor lip sync
• poor enthusiasm from band members
• unclear narrative
• bad mise-en-scene
• stop/start not being quick enough 

I agree with all that was said and so we really need to get a move on with completing our draft as it is in for under two weeks.